Friday, november 6
I got invited to a quinceaños on Thursday, this party was going to be on Friday. So Friday come by and I got in my suit and went to Cesar´s house because we were going to see each other there, but out of no where a big storm came in. The thing was that the xvs were in a open garden and it was raining very heavily. Fran called and asked us to go for him. So we went for him and then we went for some tacos at los Encomenderos. I ordered Gringas which are really good. That´s what happened on my Friday.
Franco- Although this sounds like a funny day I need to know why I should care. You should work on adding more description and some sort of meaning or message. It sounds like a Friday, but what did you learn from this particular Friday? This is cheesy, but you could totally include some sort of silly quote or at least incorporate the idea: "Life's not about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain." Even though you wanted to go to the quinceanos and it stormed instead, you made the most of it and got some delicious tacos.
ReplyDeleteGood luck on making these changes. I can't wait to see the final product. Thanks for sharing :)